Not a bad first story, I played two times. I like the interactions between Mark and Amy, but bad things can happen fast so the story feels a little cut off (maybe because I got two bad endings). I'd prefer a little more development before things go off a cliff, haha. Looks like maybe it was translated (?) so the english is a little odd, but a good effort.
Thanks for playing my story! I am very happy that you like the interactions between Mark and Amy ^_^. Have you played through the good ending? For the English part, I am still learning how to write to make it not odd, maybe I need to find someone to help me to correct the grammar and some weird sentences. Thank you.
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Not a bad first story, I played two times. I like the interactions between Mark and Amy, but bad things can happen fast so the story feels a little cut off (maybe because I got two bad endings). I'd prefer a little more development before things go off a cliff, haha. Looks like maybe it was translated (?) so the english is a little odd, but a good effort.
Thanks for playing my story! I am very happy that you like the interactions between Mark and Amy ^_^. Have you played through the good ending? For the English part, I am still learning how to write to make it not odd, maybe I need to find someone to help me to correct the grammar and some weird sentences. Thank you.
I finally got the nice ending. Keep up the good work.